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Here Rests Tranquility
Contributed by
yackerz85
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 09:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Dream and sleep-
Life runs away
past flying fields
night or day.
Beauty and splendor engage eyes;
Unconsciously drifting realms passing,
expounding greatly floating onward.
Tranquility rests here.
Here rests tranquility.
Onward floating greatly expounding
passing realms, drifting unconsciously.
Eyes engage splendor and beauty
day or night.
Fields flying past
away runs life-
Sleep and dream.
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yackerz85
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2007-03-11 21:05:18]
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Re: Here Rests Tranquility
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:04:34 PM AEST
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wow that's really good - i love the palindrome effect
nice job |
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Re: Here Rests Tranquility
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 08:22:12 PM AEST
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| Well done....I can't say I know what a palindrome is...but you have forced me to look it up. Thanks |
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