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Ambivalency
Contributed by
ashleigh
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Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:04:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My former lighthouse, guide me through
Will I get over this
The way you said that people do
Through bitter emptiness
Or am I stuck, for Ive become
Addicted to your presence
Immune to every word you say
Intoxicated by your essence
Youre the air I breathe, the touch I feel,
The taste I know so well,
The image I see, the words I voice
The flowers that I smell
The pain I feel, the scars I see
My thoughts throughout the day
The piercing feeling in my heart
The things I cannot say
It didnt used to hurt like this
I used to be OK
It seems that every Today
Is worse than yesterday
Im in a bind, but its all on me
I did this to myself
I left me open for all to see
And what I got wasnt help
Im torn you see, for what to say
Im headed for the coast
Youre ready now, is what you say
But twas yesterday I needed you most
Virulent to trusting now
I dont know what to do
For everything that I attempt
Wont bring me closer to you.
Copyright ©
ashleigh
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2007-03-12 01:04:59]
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Re: Ambivalency
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 07:02:16 AM AEST
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This was well written and well expressed. I liked this poem and I can relate to this in a way. I like the the last two stanza's the most but I like the whole poem as well. Very well expressed.
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