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What It Is
Contributed by
rhei76
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Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 02:11:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I woul like to write
Every second to make a muse
But it isn't right
Just to use
For my salvation
For my entertainment
When she won't help
Save me from me
I tell you
I don't want a life
I don't need a wife
"Won't ever forget tomorrow
or the next day
All we wonder about
the things that maybe
And all life's misgivings
And all misfortunes in the world
Has made me come to realize
That
Soon the day will be the same
As then and when
I was..."
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-03-12 14:11:31]
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Re: What It Is
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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| This is a very wise and well written poem. Good job! |
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Re: What It Is
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:02:24 PM AEST
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This was good. I liked the message that you put into this poem and the emotions and realizations that you expressed. Well done.
Take care
Christina-xo |
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