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Lose Control.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 05:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I find that when I lose control
I forget about the sorrow of my life
It's like a twisted therapy for my broken soul
All I need is a moment,
One second to slip away
From the constant suffering of every day
If I just lose control
I can lie to myself, pretending everything might be okay
But as I gaze into a blackened sun
I realize that this vicious cycle of life
Has only just begun...
So here I am on my hands and knees
A mouth full of prayers, I'm begging you please
Lord if you could shed any light upon me
You don't know how truly grateful I'd be
Because right now it seems I'm lost at grounds sea
Take my hand, guide my broken soul
Please send me a blessing
Because I'm about to lose control
And I know it's not the answer, it's not the right way
But I'm struggling just to make it through another day
This is me surrendering in my darkest hour
And I'm searchin for truth from a higher power
God send me an angel to save my soul...
Because I'm about to lose control.
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bleedthelove
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2007-03-12 17:51:43]
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Re: Lose Control.
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by Loriann on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 06:58:33 PM AEST
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This is truely a magnificant work of art. The flow is beautiful. I enjoyed reading this because I can relate.
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Re: Lose Control.
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by priss on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 07:53:52 PM AEST
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whoa, what a poem (prayer)! i can feel your agony and struggle more and more with each line like you're about to lose it and yet, there's a small inkling of optimism like you know you're not beyond help. i really like this; it is very powerful and i can totally relate. thanks so much for sharing!
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Re: Lose Control.
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by Karlee14 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 04:55:27 AM AEST
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I loved it. The flow and rhyme scheme is
awesome. I can relate. I just want you to know that
you're not the only one out there. And if you need
someone to talk to. My door is always open.
Sending you my best,
Karlee |
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Re: Lose Control.
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:29:30 PM AEST
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A very beautiful work of art. I loved it. You have a sort of unique writing style that I really enjoy reading. Everything flows smoothy and the words are full of emotion and power.
Looking forward to reading more. |
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