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Begining.
Contributed by
Tyler
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Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:33:34 PM in AEST
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Begging for some kind of sign,
Everyday, am I really fine?
Giving my heart to those untrue,
Inside asking myself what to do,
Never really knowing how I feel,
Never to be released from life's ordeal,
Innate thoughts to keep me alive,
Not to be disturbed, from seclusion I strive,
Gaining closer to death, the longer I'm living,
Annecdote of my life, this is only the beginning.
Copyright ©
Tyler
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2007-03-12 21:33:34]
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Re: Begining.
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 12:43:53 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem. I like, a lot. I feel like I can kind of relate a little.. Sorry to hear about the misfortune, hope you figure it all out.
Keep up the good work by the way, hope to see more poems real soon.
Luvs ya,
Jess |
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Re: Begining.
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by Karlee14 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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I loved the rhyme scheme. I hope you come
out of what you're going through alright.
All my love,
Karlee |
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