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Pollination
Contributed by
Dom
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Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 12:10:51 PM in AEST
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At the edge of the world
Where syllables congeal into syrup;
Sweet and golden in the sunlight,
Crystalline almost under the magnifying glass.
A rich nectar drunk by hummingbirds,
Pollinated by bees.
Brushed out from inside the flowers
Glass-glossy amaranthine petals.
Unlimited potential bursting out,
Built up through the earth, roots, stem.
Word-pollen wafting,
Breaking down,
And down
Again.
Everyday scattering our meadows,
Sowing beads of honey in our mouths.
Copyright ©
Dom
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2007-03-13 12:10:51]
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Re: Pollination
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by hgillila on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 01:52:15 PM AEST
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| I like the link you made with pollination and the spread of language. Also, the bee shape of the poem is pretty cool too. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Pollination
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 02:47:15 PM AEST
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Elegant and delightful. A feast for poets especially those who wish to savor and linger over with after dinner drinks till wee in the morn. The beauty of your pen to capture this:
"...Everyday scattering our meadows,
Sowing beads of honey in our mouths."
Bravo
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Pollination
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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| I really like this |
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Re: Pollination
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:31:06 PM AEST
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Oh my, Dom .. this IS beautiful! Truly breathtaking ..
makes me long for those dreamy and warm days of summer .. lost
in the folds of a sunny day. Incredible imagery here. And what
an INCREDIBLE metaphor. Exceptionally done, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Pollination
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:21:09 AM AEST
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Metaphorically magical piece.
Gives life to words and language that seals a simple word for all time. A living breathing meaning no longer just words. Love it. |
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