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Cocaine and Opiate
Contributed by
whitfields
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Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 01:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Let me tell you about this bad girl,
A girl by the name of cocaine.
You can snort, smoke, or inject her in a vein.
She will even let you sell her to think you'll get ahead.
The truth she is hiding is getting you in prison or even dead.
Cocaine will get you to love her,
And love her yes you will.
Some people also fall in love with her brother,
Opiate in a pill.
Now you're chasing both of them,
Your a complete mess.
You have to take them constantly,
Or you'll be in horrible stress.
So before you mess with this family,
Realize there is nothing to gain.
All this family will cause you,
Is a life full of pain.
And yes i am telling you this,
Because it is true.
Eveytime i get involved with this family,
It makes my world blue.
Copyright ©
whitfields
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2007-03-13 13:43:05]
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Re: Cocaine and Opiate
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by hgillila on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 01:49:07 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. It's cute. Although, the deepness of the subject doesn't match the sing-song feel of the poem. Still, good work. |
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Re: Cocaine and Opiate
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 07:13:49 PM AEST
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Good write
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Re: Cocaine and Opiate
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by soulsearching43 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 11:38:01 PM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this i got your comments on miss addiction and it inspired me to find your work i see you write alot about the same things i do you should check out chemical romance and lost soul they are both about addiction and his first wife is about domestic violence let me know what you think
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