|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Stronger Hearts
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:16:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
With the my Warm Heart
Warm and steadfastly beating
From the
Stronger Hearts
I've known
Seemed they were always around
While My Warm Heart goes on
Pulsing hard and racing
Awaiting its only turn
Strong Hearts
With their long and icy fingers
Do battle and give warning
Strong Hearts
Can we really win?
With Millions of Warm Hearts
Still continue trying
My Warm Heart
Is growing weary
Will it all ever be put right?
Strong Hearts
With your long cold fingers
Reaching out
Into external spaces
Be prepared to turn
The very grains of time
Strong Hearts
NOWs the time
I'm Thinking
Warm Hearts
The battle has just begun
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
... [
2007-03-14 02:16:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Stronger Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:13:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
not much to say other than powerful voice. your message was unclear to me in some parts, but we don't write for others we write for ourselves.your message was created in a way that i cannot grasp, afteralll only the writer can truly understand their own poem. i still liked this very much so please do not take offense, it is not meant in a bad way. thanks for posting
-kyle |
|
|
Re: Stronger Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:35:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It is not a battle of some few hearts but a battle that had to be fought by every living heart at the latter part of the life.
So let our heart cheer for the strong and the battling hearts.
beautifully written.
FRANCO |
|
|
Re: Stronger Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:15:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| what a joy to read this write,nice done. |
|
|
Re: Stronger Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:06:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
"...Be prepared to turn
The very grains of time..."
Lovely & Brilliant
Peace
Yang |
|
|
Re: Stronger Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:46:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i like it |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
