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Ever So Slowly
Contributed by
sick_little_fetish
on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:47:56 PM in AEST
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You are going to be my everything and I am going to make you love me
Free this static in my head,take your place next to me in our love's death bed
You are going to be my everything cause like me your nothing at all
all so hollow, so desolate, too tired, too damn weak to crawl
You are going to be my hopeless obsession
*I can't get enough*
You are going to be the target for my endless agression
*tell me, do you like it rough?*
You might make it only if you leave me unprovoked
with my hands I placed the blame, on your on lies you choked
at the end, in the end, at your end you are now
and it's YOUR fault
You are going to be my all, cause all I have is emptiness
Your the sum of my pain and joy all wrapped up to equal what I need
You are going to be my all, all I ever want or need
You tried to cover, still I discovered the evil your heart breeds
You are going to be my strength, from all i drain from in your veins
you're going to be my other half, inside you're just like me
so caught up in this world of hate and misery
so sick of all the hurt all you can do is scream
But you can take it out on me now...*you have me*
You can take it out on me now...*I'm yours, wholely*
And you can take it out on me now...
You can take it out on me...*kill eachother ever so slowly*
And I will take it out on you now...*feel my grip growing tighter*
I will take it out on you now...*Scream a little louder*
I will take it out on you ...*I wanna wear your precious blood on my hands*
I wanna take it out on you now, cause you're the only one who understands
You are going to be my everything!
You are going to be, cause you are NOTHING!
You are going to be my everything...
You are going to be my everything...
Keep my knife tight at your throat
until you say you love me
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2007-03-14 14:47:56]
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Re: Ever So Slowly
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by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:00:42 PM AEST
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maybe you should reevaluate your life and what it stands for. i don't quite understand the perspective of this poem. don't get me wrong it is very well written but to be in this situation could be potentially the beginning of your demise. in this world we need love, not forced love but love that is pure.
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Re: Ever So Slowly
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by girlg0newrong on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:23:53 PM AEST
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| Yeah above commenter you don't seem to get where this is coming from at all. It's more or less representing love from the deepest darkest corners. The thoughts that are never revealed. |
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Re: Ever So Slowly
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:06:58 PM AEST
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Very dark and consuming!
I'm not sure if I agree with the format this piece takes, but yet I am very impressed with the great and dark outpouring of emotion that just radiates off this!! |
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