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No Tommorrow
Contributed by
alison
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Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:57:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The grey clouds come,
The black birds fly,
The mist falls,
And the sun shall not shine,
The trees have long been barren,
And the locus continue to feed,
Graves are dug,
And coffins are lain,
Depression raps its arms around me,
As I fall into its embrace,
Sweet lover of lifes ending,
For all life is suffering,
Yet there shall be no tomorrow.
Copyright ©
alison
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2007-03-14 20:57:58]
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:11:21 PM AEST
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A tight wedge that cuts deeply hitting the bone of truth there is only NOW!
Excellent
Peace
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by Kairo on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:45:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful metaphors~ keep up the good work
oV(=_=) Kairo~ |
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 07:20:08 AM AEST
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This was written beautifully. Wonderful job expressing your sadness. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by Loriann on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:35:08 PM AEST
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Very excellent work on emotional expression.
Loriann |
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 03:10:11 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, nicely dun |
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Re: No Tommorrow
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 11:55:13 AM AEST
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You have express more than your self here in this poem, you have shown reverance for the art of poetry itself. This is sad true, but most beautiful in it's very nature.
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