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Lost
Contributed by
Epic
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Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 02:11:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What has happened to me? In a matter of moments Im back to where I started Step on of the heart break theory
Why did I ponder these thoughts? Imagine how things could of been How my reactions could have changed How life could have been so different
I chose this idiotic decision, but why? I hate and love once again for another individual I express my dormant feeling that have no point That lead to no where, but a pain that exceeds life
I feel sorrow and ach, why? During the whole relationship I was dying well she was living I was crying well she wore a smile
Im so lost and I dont why I just dont know how to react How do I choose a new path? How do I gain my composure?
Why do I suppress these emotions? Cause new heart break Make my senses go crazy I just want to live again
I want to be happy Put a real smile on Live like I use to, Be my old self Before she came back in to the picture I just want to experience happiness again
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Epic
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2007-03-15 02:11:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 08:55:43 AM AEST (User
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its all part of growing up and loosing your first love.just hold on things will change for the better.i injoy reading this poem.very good.
remember joy comes in the morning.your a good writer. |
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loriann on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:13:52 PM AEST (User
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This is a very strong write.
There is alot of emotion here .
Very well done.
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Re: Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by kelkel on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:41:47 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem i liked it
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