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Preparing of The Healer
Contributed by
needledancing
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Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:09:33 PM in AEST
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Universe of light now I see you build divine.
A complicated twisted life which soon would make me shine.
I carried such vengeance spit venom and hate.
I celebrate your creation now, so grateful on this date.
If pain can make you grow that wise and change a soul within.
Let pain be the master teacher and timelessness the sin.
When moments of the twisted misery unbinds,
The lessons and compassion is what every being finds.
To those who make this journey never be despaired,
Your pain to light and wisdom has all been pre-prepared.
Without my lessons etched to heart and love the dragon slay,
In bitter grown and hated box my beaten soul would lay.
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needledancing
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by Sena on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 01:28:25 PM AEST
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| Very creative and expressive. Thx for sharing. |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:10:55 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the thoughtful sentiments you poured into this piece, and I hope many more lucky readers stumble across this hope-inspiring write! I like the symmetry to the rhyme scheme as well. Thank you for posting : )
~Scorp. |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:35:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful words for some one forever on the journey.
I see you and you make me feel like some one knows.
You are more wise, I see our beaten souls help use learn to be strong.
Good write as always
eye opening for this one of dispair. |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 07:23:18 PM AEST
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It is a poem on refined philosophy of life,
there is old saying in India "when you fall you 'll know how it feels to be fallen and you learn not to fall again."
FRANCO.
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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"The creative power to form your own experience is within you now, as it has been since the time of your birth and before.
The soul is not a finished product, but a process of becoming.
As many light snacks would actually be much better than three large meals a day, so short naps rather than such an extended period would also be more effective."~Jane Roberts
Act as if you were already happy and that will tend to make you happy.~Dale Carnegie
Blessing to the Healer within.
Bravo
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 09:11:07 AM AEST
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very lovely write the very end sealed the deal for me. How true the word. This is rock solid, not only in the poetic content and verse but in the sage and wise words displayed so truthfully.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 10:45:19 AM AEST
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I am so happy to be reading this, this morning ND.
It's almost like an answer to the piece I wrote, (with
the question of karma). Exceptional wisdom in here and
so beautifully put. You have created a masterpiece
of thought for the mind to feast upon. And what a glorious
meal! I especially loved L2 in S2 .. what an idea!! :)
*hugs to you my friend*
~Breezy
[who would really rather just "drop-out" of the school of pain ..
but will take your wise words to heart none-the-less :)] |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by Mesano on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:47:44 PM AEST
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| The first line really gets you interested... A good write. Keep it up. |
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Re: Preparing of The Healer
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 05:19:39 PM AEST
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| You have to experience pain, if you never you would not know what happiness was, life is a leaning process a brilliant poem you are a very talented poet, will be reading more of your work tomorrow.. xxx |
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