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Harpies
Contributed by
daniella
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Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 12:46:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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She never asked to have it out of her reach
She could feel it graze her fingertips
And brush her lips
Whenever the sea heaved you to shore
She knows the hatred she feels isnt right
Though shes grounded and stripped of flight
She can feel a blood lust rising
Avian, theyre advancing
Immerging and Imploding
Through the atmosphere
They stole it away
As she held it tight in her hand
A red concoction she could never drink
In a bottle she couldnt shatter
A story like this is never too old to matter
But the sea still pushed you to shore
So she longs for the silence
To be filled by the empty glass
But even as the years pass
She still only hears the beating of wings
Avian, theyre evading
Converging and Crashing
Through the atmosphere
They stole it away
As she held it tight in her hand
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Re: Harpies
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 04:22:16 AM AEST
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| i'm speechless. this is incredible. |
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Re: Harpies
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by needledancing on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 10:21:09 AM AEST
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| A very well written piece. Smooth and good flow. |
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Re: Harpies
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by Mesano on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:45:38 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. It's an interesting story. Keep it up. |
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