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A Desperate Attempt To Ease The Pain

Contributed by mesano on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 08:04:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Even though I should have
expected it,
the words hurt so much more than I ever
could have imagined.
An invisible knife,
stabbing me, over and over
again,
and through the open wounds
drain my memories, a part of
my life,
and in their place seeps
emptiness.
A nothingness worse than nothing,
a nothingness that fills every space,
replacing the memories
that now blur,
when I try to recall,
and in their place, seeps
emptiness.
It's unpredictable,
burning me inside,
taking away my
breath,
so much that I curl
and hug myself,
a desperate attempt to
ease the pain.
But it's always there,
in the form of nothing,
emptiness.
I cannot think, I cannot breath,
there is nothing I can do.
The pain wont stop,
I've given up but
at least I tried.
I didn't want things to
be like this,
and I never wanted anyone to
get hurt.
But I've given up now,
and there is nothing I can do.

Copyright © mesano ... [ 2007-03-16 20:04:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Desperate Attempt To Ease The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write with a very good emotional flow. Well done.

Loriann

Re: A Desperate Attempt To Ease The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 09:46:30 PM AEST
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nicely done...i like. good that the pain does finally go away, huh? take care and thanks for sharing.
~priss

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