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My Toy Box World
Contributed by
needledancing
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Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 07:21:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Today Im Alice in Wonderland
Ill dream and finally take command.
Chasing hares with clocks
Put on candy cane socks
Going through keyholes on doors
Sliding on fresh polished floors.
Having fun with life and fantasy of soul.
Like the quivering legs of a newly born foal.
Maybe try some Peter Pan
Softer than the Charlie Chan.
And visit Tinkerbell.
Removing adult shell.
Paint like Jack Frost on the Pane
Not today its only Rain.
Visit dragons in their cave
Teach adults how to behave.
A child with spirit fed the tales
Jacks and Jills and water pails
Of every mystery
Please just let me be!
See wizards, fairies, elves.
Visiting the inner selves
Flying, Singing, Dancing with Song
Join me, come along
The freedom my soul is finally shouting
Has left my inner child seeking the outing.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-03-17 07:21:37]
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Re: My Toy Box World
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by kelkel on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 08:04:32 AM AEST
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| what a great poem i loved it i am still a kid at heart and a mother of three and it is by far the best just to get down to there level and join them in there imaginative world |
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Re: My Toy Box World
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by Loriann on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 10:08:31 AM AEST
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This was a very fun and refreshing poem to read. Everyone has a inner child it is just a matter if the are willing to let it come out or not. And when the do you feel so young and renewed. You only have one life to live and the inner child makes it all the more worth the wild to have.
Excellent write.Thank you for sharing this.
Loriann |
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Re: My Toy Box World
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:52:08 AM AEST
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A great write.
I grew up once and didn't like it so I too decided not to do it again.
Big smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Toy Box World
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:45:40 AM AEST
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How true these words are every grownup love to live his childhood just one more time for the sheer fun of it.
You have projected the grownup dream in a very elegant fashion.
I always loved your style of writing.
FRANCO.
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Re: My Toy Box World
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 05:08:37 PM AEST
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| Love this I dont think any of us want to grow up I feel you have put into words just how I feel..Its a wonderful poem. xxx |
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