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Paralyzed
Contributed by
drknocboot
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Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 04:28:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Paralyzed
Her eyes have captured me,
To complete this poem I could say nothing in addition,
But like this poem their not finished with me,
Once I am in view of your vision I am in your total submission,
So I am here for you to have your way with me,
Our distance away is a mere heart beats in motion,
However the mind controlling my body is no longer me,
Our slow measured blinking transaction has caused me to vision,
A time that you will close your eyes on me,
As you're my baby I want to preserve this feeling you have caused me relaxation,
Rest your eyes, show me your dimples and smile for me.
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drknocboot
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2007-03-23 04:28:58]
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Re: Paralyzed
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by dwgpoet on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:38:26 PM AEST
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Your Paralyzed
uncovers eyes;
behind sunglasses, under Fro.
Your MySpace surpasses, stereo
songs sung to suit any prenatal gal;
Keep Don Waun Gravitating to them all.
Nuthing ruff like my
Onomatopoeia. |
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