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~*Amidst My Dreams*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 05:33:42 PM in AEST
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The flowers sway to and fro
In the lush green meadow
As the wind gently blows
Beneath the weeping willow
The water cascades softly
Over the rock-strewn waterfall
Formed sub-zero water drops
Accumulate into dense balls
In watching such eternal bliss
My heart floats to where you are
Although we are oceans apart
It seems so close yet so far
As nightfall blankets the sky
The stars shine radiantly true
I lay down and start to reverie
Of my daily encounter with you
You tenderly take my hand
We start to dance once more
Waltzing through the cerulean sky
The clouds form our dance floor
Together we do our magic dance
Amidst the cumulous clouds above
For in my thoughts I soundly dreamt
You are my one and only true love
Tonight as I gaze into your eyes
My love for you I've totally sworn
And if we're both lucky enough
We'll meet where dreams are born.
Copyright ©
eternal_dreamer
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:40:02 PM AEST
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Might I invite myself along as your dance floor clouds sound divine & beckon to my already piroutting self?
Beautious!
~me |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 10:47:35 PM AEST
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beautifully done Sue
Together we do our magic dance
Amidst the cumulous clouds above
For in my thoughts I soundly dreamt
You are my one and only true love
absalutely lovely
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:29:27 AM AEST
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Beautiful words and beautiful thoughts
exquisitely woven into a beautiful poem.
Very sweet..absolutely a pleasant write.
Best of luck my friend-:)
venkat |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 02:03:35 AM AEST
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I agree with venket, it's very beautifull thougts-n-words.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 04:05:26 PM AEST
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Wow SueQ! A very special dedication indeed : )
I love the flow to this piece, and you played up the dreamy quality just perfectly! I'm sure A.J will be flattered when he reads this.
~Scorp. |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:32:32 PM AEST
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Sue .. so beautiful and touching .. as all your writes
seem to be. Filled with an over-flowing of emotion
and bliss. I especially adored the forth stanza. yeah,
sigh-inducing for sure, hun.
completely loverly
~Breezy |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 11:11:40 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful song from your heart that has exploding capillaries and broad smiles built in. I am honored that words of encouragement have taken such root. A thousand blessings O Infinite&Eternal_Dreamer.
Blessings
AJ |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 12:40:57 AM AEST
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Hey Sue it's good to see you back writting.
pening your poetry that is nothing short of
magic as is a rainbow, to a child's heart.
Lovely my friend indeed as always. Welcome
back.
((((Susan))))
Ben |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 06:21:28 AM AEST
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A warm and touching dedication.I like the friendliness and the interwoven blanket of support that members offer each other here.Well done Sue,well done AJ,
dEN |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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| Wow, a very delicicious flow to this, warm and sincere. I especially like the peace that leads into delight and happiness! |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Crow on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 12:34:50 PM AEST
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hard to comment on this write too! I`m going to quit writing,, lol! this is so pretty Sue.
I enjoy reading your work. you have to forgive me I`m gone for days sometimes from this site. Vincent |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:09:56 AM AEST
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Hauntingly beautiful. I think this is my
favorite poem by you to date! That’s
saying a lot because I love your poetry.
Excellent write!
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:03:15 AM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Dom on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:29:29 PM AEST
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Your descriptions are simply mesmerising, I got caught up in the images in each stanza.
You have penned a beautiful poem that has filled my mind with peace and enchantment, thank you.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 02:08:14 AM AEST
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It is a beautifully composed poem, a dream of charming beauty and emotion -
" Tonight as I gaze into your eyes
My love for you I've totally sworn
And if we're both lucky enough
We'll meet where dreams are born."
Touched my heart Indeed.
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 12:22:18 AM AEST
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Sue -
Beautiful, just beautiful! A wonderful flow a precious and real sentiment in your words. Some outstanding lines here, but I will not deline the piece! A gentle romantic work filled with captivating imagery. The last line, damn!
BRAVO!
Daniel |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 10:22:52 PM AEST
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| Sweet poem ,tahnks for sharing bern. |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 11:09:59 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Gotta love that last line
"We'll meet where dreams are born"
Mike |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th August 2007 @ 05:01:54 PM AEST
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where are you my dearest friend,
I miss you oh so much
let me know just how you are
please please get in touch
i do miss all the banter
the words passed to and thro
I hope you and yours are doing well
please please let me know
lovely poem by the way from a lovely poetess
hugs to you from across the blue
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 12:07:14 PM AEST
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i like this sue, there's a bit of a difference yet
the sincerity and true hertfelt warm magic is
still ever present in every sylable and phrase
you pen, your one of a kind, welcome back
my friend . . .
((((Roo))))
Ben |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 09:04:09 AM AEST
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very inspirational writing.
thank you for sharing.
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by karoody on
Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 02:27:03 AM AEST
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My lovely Sue from across the blue!
After reading this, I know you understood my reference to calling you my soul friend...
Such a beautiful peice for your love. I was so deeply moved. From the very first line, you drew a wonderful picture with your words. straight from your heart and soul. You may have gone through tough times. But In this case, you reallly were pulled closer to something, huh?
love, smiles and huge hugs
kara |
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Re: ~*Amidst My Dreams*~
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by Archie on
Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 10:59:51 AM AEST
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| I guess its been awhile since you posted a poem, or that i read one of yours. This is a very good write, it reminds me of my own style. |
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