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Take Over
Contributed by
catz77
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Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 10:48:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Careless and Demanding
Will get you everything
It will get you power
And it will make men cower
Stepping on people to get home
Like youre the king of Rome
A constant terrifying grin
You will always walk and win
No one stands up to a man
Whos only wish is to demand
Patient and Generous
Strong and Affectuous
Helping all who fall to the ground
Keeping everyone from falling down
Teaching honesty and love
Expressing the serenity of a dove
Fighting for the right to give
And teaching the dead to live
A man of real power
That will never cower
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catz77
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2007-03-24 22:48:20]
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Re: Take Over
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:48:33 AM AEST
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| A great comparitive and a good question as to which kind of power serves us best. Very well done. |
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Re: Take Over
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:48:09 AM AEST
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excellent write.
The show of power by these two catagories
it helps one see where he would fall. |
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