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Inked
Contributed by
rhei76
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Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Into the black, washed in ink, vivid loudly spoke.
Out of the cleansed, now marked, for ritual acceptance,
He left the fantasy with a patch.
Turned around in three days, for punctuation of his flesh,
A little flare, a little sting, A little tag
That says
Hey Im alive, my body a temple, I will decorate
Before the tomb
Two more times that week, and twice the week after
Since then its been two years, two sleeves
His shirt, pierced with color
Art its what makes me, pain it helps me
Feel the sensation of being alive
I might be odd, but the number seems to grow
In a few years some one will name us a tribe
And reconstruct Surgical Steel Road
Life has told me, its not about the individual
Its about how you place it, its in the arrangement
Of all the world,
There is harmony, somewhere for everyone
Find your place and enjoy your time
Before the tomb
Into the black, washed in ink, vividly marked now
For ritual cleansing, cause, I thought I should
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rhei76
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Re: Inked
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:43:02 PM AEST
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Truth be tlod, it confused me a bit
I liked the direction you were going but i got lost along the way
gess thats just me
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Re: Inked
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 07:27:09 AM AEST
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You did a good job. You expressed your feelings and anger. Good poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Inked
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by PorcelainCellophane on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 01:49:47 AM AEST
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Yes, 'before the tomb'.
Interesting expression.
Body mods, piercings & ink....these are a few of my favorite things...
Thanks for sharing this piece.
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