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The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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One
night amidst
my pondering at
the evening sky above,
upon a haze my eyes would
gaze into the face of
love.
So
beautiful
you were to me
in all your radiant glow,
the thought of you would
make an angel wanna
love you
so.
But
not an angel
could i be deservingly
of you, and yet upon this earth
with me we shared a love so
true.
The
star that came
to love me from another
galaxy, perhaps was thinking
of me just as much as i of
thee.
Now
no longer need i ponder
at that haze so bright, since the star
that came to love me glows beside me every
night.
Ben
A pleasant week end to all.
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myheartsvoice
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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 09:25:00 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very romantic, my friend.
Simply beautifull. Say hi to the misses for me and you two have the best weekend ever.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 09:04:38 AM AEST
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Yes, this is just so romantic and beautiful.
I love the last stanza and am very happy that you have found such a person to share your life with.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:33:55 AM AEST
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| Well no need to ask what would love do for this...Spectacular flight just taken off. Well done and those stars in your eyes are kinda blinding....lol Excellent |
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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:42:02 PM AEST
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Ben~
Romantically beautiful, inspiring and so uplifting. You are the envy of many for a love like yours is so hard to find my dear friend.
Your beautiful poetry warms the heart~
A most gorgeous woven tapestery of love. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
much love to you & your lovely wife.
As always your fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:31:05 PM AEST
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how beautiful to liken her to a star, your a bottomless well of sweetness, you are:)
love n' hugs nessa
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