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Sunset over the sea
Contributed by
einstein
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Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 10:19:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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while I look in your eyes
I see something i've never seen before
I see myself in your life
now before you say no, I love you more
sunset over the sea
shows nothing compared to your beauty
shining stars in the night sky
shows nothing but another jealous guy
because I have you
and i'm happy to know
that you love me, too
but my love for you has already grown
i'm so in love with you and your beauty,
with your smooth skin,
and your loving personality
i'm here for a new true love to begin..
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einstein
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2007-03-30 22:19:49]
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Re: Sunset over the sea
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:22:54 AM AEST
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| Always happy to read lines of the flying hearts of love. A wonderful piece and dedication to your loved one. |
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Re: Sunset over the sea
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by yackerz85 on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 12:02:35 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poetry. I especially like your comparisons in the second stanza. And the fact that your love grows instead of fading away confirms how true your feelings are. |
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