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The Kiss of Betrayal
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 10:11:35 AM in AEST
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Two millenniums passed
yet lingers the kiss of betrayal
deep buried in our hearts
like a piercing spike of venom.
Memory roll backward to that night,
sending shivers of fright, as
creatures of the night prowl he alone
kneeled gazing above and bawled.
Far from the darkness, appeared dots
of torchlights carried by hired goons marched
to capture the peaceful moon, he who, quietly
shed tears of blood to forgive the approaching goons.
Light of peace still glowing
from his face, preached love and
forgiveness as death entangled his base
like a nightmarish lace.
A sheep from his own flock stepped
forward sheepishly to plant the kiss of
betrayal, stunning evil soul to cease
for mere silvery piece.
Seasons passed years rolled by but time stood
still in our hearts as the testimony of a lowly human heart
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-04-01 10:11:35]
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 02:47:22 PM AEST
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This was an excellent write. especially mfor this time of the year to remind us of what happened so long ago. It was a true honor to read this. Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 08:08:58 PM AEST
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Franco, you never cease to deliver a very emotion-filled
write. As Loriann stated, this is absolutely perfect timing
with Easter coming on ..
You did justice to a subject that has been so often written
about. Your unique approach and beautiful sadness
within the words was enough to almost break my heart.
Thank you for sharing this, my friend.
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 09:36:39 PM AEST
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You did a great job with this write.
You're very creative.
huggs,
emy
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 03:41:11 PM AEST
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Time seems to fly by so quickly in our era, but your "time stood still" pause to reflect and remember has been duly noted by this reader. So, too, has the emotion embedded here and the rhymes that you've employed to carry the reader forward through the piece.
Nicely done, Franco.
~Snemmy
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 11:05:33 AM AEST
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Franco~
A deep and emotive filled write you have penned for us here my dear poet friend.
An excellent post detailing events of long ago. Your timing was perfect as Easter was just days away. You did the subject justice my dear poet friend. Your writings intrigue me and they always touch my heart. Thank you so much for being so kind enough to share your poetry & your beautiful loving heart with us.
love & hugs,
sue m |
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Re: The Kiss of Betrayal
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:21:59 AM AEST
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gave me chills! :O
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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