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His desire
Contributed by
Loriann
on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 03:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Deep inside him the desire did burn.
A lust for her deep within in him did burn.
He watched every move that she did make.
Waiting for the right moment for him to take.
Her dreamed about what it would be like to feel her body close by.
A lustful passion he held so deep and could no longer deny.
He studied every curve and observed every move.
Watched her body dance and swirl and groove.
Deep inside he felt that burning desire.
A desire the burnt like the wildest fire.
He wanted to touch her to kiss her like so.
But he never gave an indication to let her know.
He watched her full and pouting lips.
The curve of her full and welcoming hips.
How he wanted to make passion with her now.
But he has hesitated for so long because he knows not how.
How to approach such a goddess in his eyes.
How how his heart can no longer taking the burning cries.
He needs her now like never before.
But deep inside he feels that he can not go in for the score.
So deep inside remains the burning desire.
That will continue to burn like the wildest of fire.
Following her every where she may go.
Dreaming and lusting til he can see the hext show.
The show she puts on at the club she goes to.
Waiting to see what she will do.
He smells her perfume when he passes by.
But cannot approach because deep inside he is shy.
So he must live with this longing desire.
And hope so day he can build up the nerve to put out this raging fire.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-04-01 15:02:06]
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Re: His desire
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 08:22:29 PM AEST
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It is a poem that reflects many living souls who bury their desire deep within and keep waiting in -
"hope some day he can build up the nerve to put out this raging fire."
My friend it is a wonderful portrayal of an introvert person.
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Re: His desire
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:51:09 AM AEST
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This was written well. I liked this. It does portray a desire that most of us feel but can not take action or do anything with these desires because of the things we fear. This was a good poem.
Take care
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