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.......Service.......
Contributed by
SunRaise
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Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 03:49:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Service please someone my wrists are bleeding
unconditional love is what Im needing.
Service please my heart is aching
to the point my whole entire body is quaking.
Service please someone help my bruised soul
Im slowly losing all self control.
Service please I cant hide all my troubles much more
happiness is what I often pray for.
Service please someone console me
I wonder if I was a man how I would be?
Service please I need help to understand why people hurt me
I have been so kind and nicly.
Service please someone help me please my wrists are bleeding
Unconditional love is what Im needing.
Service please someone help me Ive killed myself because the way people act towards the hurt.
When someone says their hurting deep down inside
please dont avert and push their feelings aside
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2007-04-04 03:49:36]
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Re: .......Service.......
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by Ratwick on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 04:55:56 AM AEST
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Great poem! simple and clean schemes. I seriously hope your wrists arent bleeding though!!! I think people dont acknowledge when others are hurt like that because theyre just afraid of the pain theyre feeling, sometimes anyways. thanks for posting!
Write On!
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Re: .......Service.......
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by runawaynameless on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 02:21:19 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot. People are just like that. No one believes in empathy any longer. |
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Re: .......Service.......
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by heaviestcat on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 11:10:02 AM AEST
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| I hope ,you an find strength in your writing SunRaise because you really are talented. Your words have power. keep writing. You have alot to say and are needed here.Thank you. |
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Re: .......Service.......
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by heaviestcat on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 11:10:06 AM AEST
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| I hope ,you an find strength in your writing SunRaise because you really are talented. Your words have power. keep writing. You have alot to say and are needed here.Thank you. |
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Re: .......Service.......
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by Evilyne on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| I really like it, It says what everyone needs to know "please don’t avert and push their feelings aside" Thanks. |
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