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Vanagon Dreams
Contributed by
chris_N
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Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 03:35:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Teeter, tip
natural all, un dulce of fantasy
poisons the well
The sickened pushed out,
Better health beyond approach
From a distance, shakes the
ant farm, tunnels collapse, reform, form
The minors in the shaft, mute
as the canary wilts unnoticed
The feathered familiar falls
a blurred split in the dome
Claret spills, finger-talons
reach to wet, wonder
Copyright ©
chris_N
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2007-04-05 03:35:20]
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Re: Vanagon Dreams
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 03:54:48 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. My name is Christina.
This was a good poem. Very creative way of expressing your thoughts. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Vanagon Dreams
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by chris_N on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 11:44:22 AM AEST
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| Just to give some context to this writing, there was a party last summer that I decided to try psychedelic mushrooms for the first time, had an unbelievably high dose (3 grams amazonian) and had a horrible night, had my friends contemplating a hospital visit, and then the host's found out and that just topped it all off. Since then, the social dynamic has been very different among my friends, and from this one transgression I had been summarily ostracized, even though ironically I stopped using illegal substances, while they continue, and I wonder who is better off, myself (with a horrific experience) or the others with ignorance. |
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Re: Vanagon Dreams
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 04:01:46 PM AEST
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| Well, that's ***** up. I like this. The surreal image is splendidly dramatic. |
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