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through my eyes what you cant feel

Contributed by boredoms_burden on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 11:55:13 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



so im saying that ill love you until the day i die
and im saying that ill never forget the time we cried
and im saying that i still care
and your beautiful to me and thats all that matters in the world
you were me and i was you i layed my head down just to prove that im sorry
for what i did, and i would do anything just to relive just one more second next to you and im sorry for all i do
and i know when your gone i will live in pain all my life long
and cry oceans of tears for the life that i once feared
i just want one more chance i just wanna be with you
i just want change the lies and i want to change the truth
i cant sleep at night not bein next to you
is it depression or is it fate
is it fear or was it hate
i just want to hear your voice
i just want things to change
i just want things to be the same
i dont wanna feel this pain
i didnt mean to make you cry
ill regret this all my life
i just wanna make things right
i just wanna go back in time
i just want break down, and i know why
but its over so why shouldnt this die
im tired of this town
im tired of this place i just want to be with you and your embrace
i wish it was all still intact
and was still colored instead of black
i....just.........want.............my........ life........back





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Re: through my eyes what you cant feel (User Rating: 1 )
by rcsparkie123 on Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 12:06:57 PM AEST
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yeah, I felt this way......well I still do.....i just broke up with my boyfriend and my heart is broken and I cry everyday..well he broke up with me.....so......uhh..good write though


Re: through my eyes what you cant feel (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 7th April 2007 @ 11:27:57 PM AEST
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Sounds like a heart is breaking and there is no cure but time....I hope time passes quickly and love finds you again.
A heartfelt write.




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