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My Drunken Psyche and the Foolishness of My Heart
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 09:08:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I whirl around contained by the drunkenness of my psyche,
I attempt to comprehend the motivation for my foolish action.
Deliberating over the facts and artificial exploits of senseless machines,
The rats nibble at my feet eagerly waiting for the word,
choking on their anticipation.
The gun is shot by him, the one in black,
He whispers in their ears.
They play a game of telephone, mocking the childhood memory,
Irony laughing in the face of the grown.
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ivoryA
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Re: My Drunken Psyche and the Foolishness of My Heart
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:49:11 PM AEST
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I couldn't really follow along, but I like it
I like the title too |
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