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Confusion
Contributed by
liindso14
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Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:16:57 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I struggle through everyday
Just trying to be okay
Your love is like a razor on my skin
Destroying my heart from within
All your truths and lies
All add to my hearts demise
My only escape is when I sleep
From all the horrible memories that I reap
You say youre sorry for what youve done
But youve no idea the web of pain youve spun
Its all so hard to sustain
Now im going insane
Not sure whether to love you or hate you
To kiss you or kill you
Youre my cure, my hope, my safety
But at the same time youre my disease
Im so confused by you
I dont know if what you say is ever true
You bring me so much shame
And now im tired of this endless game
So I guess ive been played
But then why have you stayed
All youre fake tears
Youre not the person as you appear
Your wicked games of love and hate
You can't play with fate
So whether you love me or not
Youre too blind to see what youve got
So let me be
So my heart can finally be free
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Re: Confusion
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:53:39 PM AEST
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| well written piece, you've done a good job and stating it loud, |
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Re: Confusion
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by Suzanna on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:19:27 AM AEST
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There are some decietful people out there, never mind, mixed emotions are the begining of healing wounds (does that make sense?) soon the lows will stretch out into a steady line of normal emotions (similar to a death), time is a great healer.Sorry 4 babling on, you really do capture the inconsistancy of human emotions and display a perfectly, easy to relate to example of confusion, especially when it comes to love, well done.
Nicole.x |
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Re: Confusion
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 01:53:48 AM AEST
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| I am saddened that a person has tortured your spirit and brought you shame. We put such trust in those we blindly love. Trust is the hardest to find after this...time, more time...an open heart to the next who would enter that space..as one love of mine reminded me...he did not want to pay insurance on the damage done before him.It opened my heart to allow him to prove himself...and he did. |
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