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andys first kiss
Contributed by
detourchick
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Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 01:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My first kiss
As I was walking out into the black of night
I was almost through the doors threshold
When I felt her hand in mine
I turned around and looked into her beautiful green eyes
I felt my body move closer to hers
Our lips locked in a magical moment I will remember forever
As the stars lit up the night I walked out her door on a cloud
My first kiss
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Re: andys first kiss
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:44:49 AM AEST
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the first kiss is in some ways, the best.
partially just because it's so memorable.
sounds lovely, and i'm happy for you...although it sounds like your not writing about yourself.
either way - great write.
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