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Drink Up
Contributed by
checkered_dots
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Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 07:27:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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Drink Up, it'll be okay
let the covers slide away
one night doesn't make
her a whore
Spark the fire
and the crown is lifted
to someone else's head
bring down the sky
and all of life's lovely colors
"We the people of the United States"
and kill what little light
is left of her beautiful face
to many people crowd
the minds eye, watching
waiting, and the door opens
escape
Thirteen Stripes and fifty stars
blook and gorgeous blue sky's
there goes the car crash
four days fone by and
already a new person formed
go out dancing reniassance
style. Too many reasons to hate
no time to let these clothes shed
off. Drink up, it'll be okay.
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checkered_dots
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2007-04-14 07:27:37]
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Re: Drink Up
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:03:08 AM AEST
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i love this...it has a good flow to it...and almost comical in a way
"drink up, it'll be okay"
but...i really do think this is a GREAT write.
- Bethani - |
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