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Us, Then...
Contributed by
zenith66
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Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 12:26:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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We continue to fly through these wild dreams together,
the late summer heat upon our backs,
Two old freinds lost in time,
dipping into careless thoughts
sipping summer wine,
A mutual nostalgia of late summer days,
When all the worlds worrys were swept away,
With a light playfull breeze,
In the fresh cut grass on our knees,
And caught in a updraught, along with our laughter,
Those jinni joes, we flew together
Without any true aim or meaning...
Just young lovers dreaming.
By laurence bourke
just turned 18 on saturday
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zenith66
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2007-04-14 12:26:19]
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Re: Us, Then...
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by yackerz85 on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 12:59:42 PM AEST
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| Very well written. I got a very clear picture of what you were describing. I like the nostalgic feelings behind the poetry. Recalls some memories of my own. |
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Re: Us, Then...
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 14th April 2007 @ 10:09:35 PM AEST
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| Aw it's really beautiful and descriptive. Don't ever stop writing...even if your PC is broken! |
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