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Breathe Freely
Contributed by
brew
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Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:30:46 AM in AEST
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New breaths of life in which I inhale
Endless tasks which now have prevailed
No more hardship, just life
Beginnings which bring forth new hope and smiles
Cascading dreams which keep the heart skipping
Happiness, depth, and no more turmoil
Bleakness, GONE
Take thy left hand and lead it to the path of new horizons
Never let it go, hold tightly : Its fragile, yet strong
Never will tremble again...It has been found
Simplistic and Woven
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brew
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2007-04-15 08:30:46]
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:20:10 AM AEST
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truly beautiful, i love it.
- Bethani - |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by Crow on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:46:18 AM AEST
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| Brew, this is a very solid write, brightness and strength. very good read. Vincent |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:30:06 AM AEST
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my dear Dayna .. so HAPPY to see you posting
again!!! (Missed you)
Breathe freely .. oh yes and what an enormous breath you've
taken in here, my dear poet. How tremendous your words and
how perfect the clarity.
It truly is simplistic and woven. Well done, girl.
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 11:29:25 AM AEST
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| I CAN TELL YOUR HEART IS INTO THIS ONE |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:36:34 PM AEST
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| I LOVE IT BREW SHOWS YOU ARE OPENING YOUR HEART ONCE AGAIN |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:37:45 PM AEST
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| I LOVE IT BREW SHOWS YOU ARE OPENING YOUR HEART ONCE AGAIN |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 02:27:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem and wisdom in your true brew manner. Another treasure to be hold and words to live by.
Ben |
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Re: Breathe Freely
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by snny385 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2010 @ 03:45:53 PM AEST
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| Nice flow. very touching. Wonderful write. =) |
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