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Untouched Feelings.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 01:49:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Swaying hips, made like a gun,
The most beautiful girl...
Before my eyes, beyond the stars, beneath the sun
In the world, in the air, on my tongue
Her presence, sheer essence is still known
I feel her in my energy, passing winds that have blown
In all my dreams I give to you,
Gold leafed wings of unknown truths
Pools of love that I slowly bled
Untouched feelings forgotten but not dead
Vivid images smiling red...
Pouring from my heart and swirling in my head
Through the holes in my hands
A crown of thorns I made for you
Resting beside your throne the whole way through
And here I stand...
Writing poems in the sunset for you
So carry me to the shoreline
Burry me in the sand
Walk me across our bridge
And maybe you'll understand...
How much I truly love you.
...I Miss You Luci...
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2007-04-16 01:49:46]
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Re: Untouched Feelings.
(User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:45:24 AM AEST
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| your poetry's very good! |
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Re: Untouched Feelings.
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by needledancing on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 11:11:19 AM AEST
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| An absolutely powerful write of love and longing truly done by a master hand. |
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