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To Rise, We Fall
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 01:03:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Endless seeking
In a journey of pain.
Can't stand another failure,
Fall down, imperfect rain.
Drenched in sorrows,
But continue to desire.
Sobbing wet with discouragement,
Will you ever climb higher?
Do so much to succeed,
But something holds you back.
Shove aside love and happiness,
Just to stay on track.
In the end, all alone,
What you wanted already come through.
Success is meaning the best to others,
Not what's best for you.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2007-04-17 13:03:52]
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Re: To Rise, We Fall
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by runawaynameless on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 01:23:00 PM AEST
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| This was really good. In life we go through bumpy times and as we do this we learn from that. Sometimes from the bumps we feel we cannot go on. So just keep trying, eventually it will all catch up |
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Re: To Rise, We Fall
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 03:14:41 PM AEST
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| very nicely done |
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Re: To Rise, We Fall
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 11:16:22 AM AEST
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Life... My friend you have painted a true picture of life,
"In the end, all alone,
What you wanted already come through.
Success is meaning the best to others,
Not what's best for you." These lines made me think.
Beautifully penned.
FRANCO
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