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Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
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Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 12:45:48 PM in AEST
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Ive always been there for you
My shoulder was always on call, even though I didnt want you to cry
I thought I could trust you
You were my best friend through thick and thin
As we got older boys became an issue.
We swore wed never let them hurt our friendship
But suddenly my shoulder got gradually tired
So many times you had cried over a guy.
Then when it came to a time when I needed your shoulder
It wasnt there
Yes, I was crying over a guy
But also over you.
He was my boyfriend and also my first real love
You took him from me
You acted so easily you smiled and waved at me
Even though you could see my mascara running
Then you said the worst is it ok that me and him are together?
Those were your damn words
If it had been more than five minutes after he crushed my heart I wouldnt have cared but no
He crushed my heart, but not nearly as much as you did
You also crushed it and on that same damn day
I acted as if I didnt car because I never dared to cry on your shoulder because of him
I gave you my trust you took it for granted
But I kept to my promise I didnt let a boy ruin our friendship
But after this happening more than a couple of times
Its you ruining our friendship
Ive given you so many chances to prove youre
Worthy of my trust
Guess I was wrong, huh?
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Re: Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
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by justagirl82 on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 01:18:10 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your writing and it's so honest and true. My only advice; be strong. |
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Re: Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 03:30:19 AM AEST
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Losing a friend is a hard thing to do. As you get older it will happen over and over again.
Trust in your heart, though it is hurting be strong and move on.
I can tell you from personal experince if your best friend plays a move on your man and he goes neither one of them are worth your time or your heart. Rise above it...... You deserve better.
Michelle |
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Re: Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
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by jenniferstein2007 on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 04:53:00 PM AEST
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| cool poem |
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Re: Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
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by jgold010 on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:14:58 PM AEST
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Great poem with raw emotions.
However, I disagree with Shelby. Although, your friend is low enough to steal someone you cared about, if she has done this on multiple occassions, she's obviously jealous of you and trying to prove something to you, maybe that she can get anyone you can?. The best thing you could do is forgive her, keep giving her that shoulder to cry on and she will truly resent what she has done to you because she will know you are a true friend. |
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Re: Trust?? What would YOU know about that?
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by whiskybear on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 06:08:16 PM AEST
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I alway agree with shelby... It's happen to me... my best friend and my boyfriend when I was in the same house.... You don't need them in your life you are stonger then that.... Trust is not something that everyone gets, they have to prove to you that you can trust them....
Just be strong |
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