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i want to believe in you
Contributed by
priss
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Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 02:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i want to believe in you
believe the things you say are real
believe that you can feel
the way i feel for you.
are you too clouded to sense my truths
to know that i can see the good in you
no matter what you do
even though you can't see it in yourself?
i'm not ready to let you go
despite how detrimental you will be
forgiving i am of all the things i've yet to see
and all the things i already know.
willing i am, though hesitantly so
to let you in and bare my soul,
releasing all the strength i hold
just to hold you.
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priss
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2007-04-20 14:32:43]
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Re: i want to believe in you
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 03:22:02 AM AEST
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Incredible, you showed us all your feelings and talent.
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Re: i want to believe in you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 08:44:01 AM AEST
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Oh priss .. I applaud you my friend. You have bared your soul with
this and shared an emotion I feel most are akin to. What wouldn't
we do for those we love and care about, in spite of our own
sufferings, eh?
Your strength, your beauty, your undeniable character is dripping from
your words, hun. I am truly inspired by this.
You are a remarkable person. And this is quite a remarkable
piece.
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: i want to believe in you
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by detourchick on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 05:02:14 AM AEST
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doesnt it suck to feel like that lol
great wirite! |
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