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Circle
Contributed by
crow
on
Friday, 20th April 2007 @ 11:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My body wakes
smell of hot coffee
cut with to much with wheat,
Juan Valdez" would never
put-up with this.
Should have taken
the scenic route
free of diesel, and jet
fuels, might have
borrowed the Burrow" Juan
seems to be a kind man.
North to South
East to West
the American dream,
tighten your belt..
join the circle..
no one without
their last minute`s thought.
Yes young lady
I watch the lights,
the miles were never kind,
lullaby songs
and raggedy dolls
are just down the isle.
We all should have a meaning
in this disposable capsule adrift
all hold hands, like a universal prayer..then go our separate way..Vincent
(St.Louis Airport)
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-04-20 23:48:58]
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Re: Circle
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 01:36:00 AM AEST
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Hey man,
should I take this as your off into the wild blue yonder again ey? I sent you a pm keep me in mind.
Michelle |
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Re: Circle
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by brew on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 02:45:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful words.hmm I agree with Michelle, taking a trip? Or the mind is wanting to make a journey?!?! Well whatever it be, may it be a splendid, journey....and bring smiles........Loved it
Brew~ |
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Re: Circle
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 06:44:12 AM AEST
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Awww I really like this. Little things, like the coffee, seemed so important here. I loved the feel of the traveling with the other folks. Nice stuff man, and it left me with such a wonderful feeling.
Peace, Laura
(next time your heading into St. Louis let me know...we're only an hour from the airport) |
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Re: Circle
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 08:13:38 AM AEST
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Very nice poem..
Blessings |
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Re: Circle
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 10:26:49 AM AEST
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sweet write, looks like fun!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Circle
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 02:49:42 PM AEST
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| Yes this speaks much of travel and thought while about doing so..well done. |
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