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I look at the moon
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 09:57:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Release come in many forms
Some folks find it in Music
I find mine
Looking up at the Moon
So close yet so
far away
Are their really folks more like me
Living on the moon
This life down here is just so ugly
We can not deny
That we've done
and done to our selves
****** chains of the burden
are grabbing
me heart
more and more each day
I wish I were on the moon
With folk more like me
Everybody is hating their neighbour here
And the Bees have all gone
Simple bees to pollate
Whats wrong with flowers
Skies are just araging
From the Oceans
they Open and spills out
the Vomit we have thrushed upon it
The Seas dont lie
*******a form of release
You can find it music
I find mine looking at the moon
Dreaming wishing I was with them
Nothing means what it used too
Everything is corroded, infested ,
Frugal, Tyranny stifling with its stink.
Relinquishing nothing, taking all,
malarkey ad maladroit.
*******yes I look at the moon a shiny place far away
Where there must be more like me
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2007-04-21 09:57:39]
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Re: I look at the moon
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by jenniferstein2007 on
Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 04:18:21 PM AEST
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| You are very talented and i cannot wait to hear more from you. |
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Re: I look at the moon
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 01:54:48 AM AEST
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wow, great poem! keep it up, and thank you for reviewing my poem.
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Re: I look at the moon
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by Dawn17 on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 10:03:59 AM AEST
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i love this poem
the Full moon is for me
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