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poison
Contributed by
johndough111
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Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Waking in such a place, disgrace clawing at your face
Hitting the snooze button when the alarm rings, do you do it because youre tired or because you dread all of the opportunities that today brings
A closet so full of beautiful things, oh please tell me what happiness all this brings
. Laughing at those that dont fit the mold, yet all you do is what your told. Empty has become the norm, every word that is said, and every remark thats uttered; all of it is poison in another form.
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Re: poison
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 07:41:42 PM AEST
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I liked this
Empty has become the norm,
I can relate to that line a lot keep on writing and feeling i love your stuff |
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Re: poison
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by cinammon102 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:31:25 AM AEST
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| Wow! I really love this poem it really relates to people our age (im 15) "Laughing at those that don't fit the mold, yet all you do is what your told." it is so true about teens today so keep writing. |
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