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That Night
Contributed by
positivelypurple
on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 05:35:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to capture that night
And revive those moments
When the sweet sullen moonlight
Grazed our silky skin and
The rain from my eyes
Purged my spirit and
Your breath diminished
My heart stains.
The gravity of the past
Wandered freely between us
And created a glow
In spite of the shadows.
Our bodies became light
And floated to another plain
A world pure in its elements
Immeasurable by time
Vast as the ocean
And as infinite as the sky.
Unexpected collision
A mutual fondness
Fork in the road
Boundless possibilities
Leaves rustling lightly
In the morning breeze
Silence
You are gone
Copyright ©
positivelypurple
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2007-04-23 17:35:42]
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Re: That Night
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by Dom on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 09:44:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful light imagery and a very sensual poem.
I really enjoyed reading this,
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: That Night
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:13:48 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: That Night
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by bluestars on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 06:37:30 AM AEST
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Great poem
love the way you put such great
detail to it i could feel like i was truely
there myself reminds of my own special night
Thanks for sharing it with us all
Best wishes |
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