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Slaughterhouse
Contributed by
Immortal-Dragon21
on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 09:30:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Rise from your grave and bare witness to the beauty as
An entire generation falls mindlessly into destruction
Fed to the wolves as they writhe and grind in there agony,
An agony they created
Feel the unbridled lust of the slaughter
As it courses & winds through your veins,
Give in to the rage as it consumes your immortal spirit
Let it seethe and fester in your hatred and then lash out
Surrender to your vicious bloodlust and kill,
Raise your swords & strike at theyre hearts and minds
Corrupt them with your alluring savagery, oh how seductive it is,
How they screamoh listen to them scream, as if music
Like a shrill, demented choir of lost children
Hear the sickening kiss of a blade on their skin
As you paint with a brilliant shade of crimson,
Smell the rancid air of burning decay
And dream, child of murder, dream your beguiling, bewitching dreams
Copyright ©
Immortal-Dragon21
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2007-04-23 21:30:34]
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Re: Slaughterhouse
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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| i find this to be sick |
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Re: Slaughterhouse
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:48:36 AM AEST
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I actually found this interesting and amazing. I am just that kind of person. Do I dare tell that I found this to be beautiful and I loved it. You did a great job. Great poem.
Take care
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Re: Slaughterhouse
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:50:17 PM AEST
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very sick and twisted...but an awesome write...great job
lots of love
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Re: Slaughterhouse
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 11:28:52 AM AEST
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Interesting Indeed
well done |
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