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Words as Weapons
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 10:20:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Her eyes, as bright as a summer nights star. Her lips, as soft as a heavenly cloud. My mind, my soul, my love, all hers they are. Her voice pierces me, so soft yet so loud
Feel like Im in a trance, always waiting, Waiting for a feeling of care from her. I lay myself to sleep, so sedating. I wait, my life passes by, just a blur.
My love for her is never-ending, A vicious cycle of anguish and pain. During her touch I am surrendering. I dig this whole, into which I have lain.
Wish shed know the truth, wish shed even care. I lay to sleep, knowing shes my slayer.
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xoxpaperxheartxox
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2007-04-23 22:20:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Words as Weapons
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 11:27:26 PM AEST (User
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ooh! this is so sad, yet so good! |
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Re: Words as Weapons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shaina_Nay-Nay on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:28:51 PM AEST (User
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Wow O_O
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Re: Words as Weapons
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:18:19 PM AEST (User
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good flow |
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Re: Words as Weapons
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 10:06:23 AM AEST (User
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sad and brilliant, what else can i say its perfect in my view.. i can feel ur pain |
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