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Hand in hand - [Alt Title: I Need You]
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 06:50:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I need you-
Like the sky needs
the ocean blue
They exist in this world
hand in hand
Like the ocean waves
and smooth wet sand
Without each other
they are not the same
So for forever and eternity
they together remain
Sky and ocean
wave and sand
Existing, living
hand in hand
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Quilted_rag_doll
... [
2007-04-25 06:50:30]
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Re: Hand in hand - [Alt Title: I Need You]
(User Rating: 1 )
by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 09:13:54 AM AEST
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I LOVED IT ...IT HAS A REALLY GO FLOW TO IT KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITES
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Re: Hand in hand - [Alt Title: I Need You]
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 03:41:34 PM AEST
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There's a very sweet tone and delightful undercurrent (lol - pun intended) to this. It feels very much like a "random thought that became a poem".... and wonderful thing about it is that the thought was lovely to begin with... and become even more so when set on the page.
Man... don't you just love poetry? : )
~Snem |
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