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You!
Contributed by
PoeticWriter
on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:35:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart is torn in two
And its all because of you!
You hurt me with the words you said
And I know you feel our love is dead.
There's more to me than you'll ever know
The pain inside, I just can't let go.
The love for you I have in my heart
Will forever be and shall never part.
You think of me as just a friend
But the way I feel is not pretend.
I wish you could see my love is real
And not just something I want you to feel.
I love you more than you'll ever know
Although you think it doesn't show.
You are the one that's right for me
And I thought you and I were meant to be.
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PoeticWriter
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2007-04-26 02:35:38]
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Re: You!
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:42:14 AM AEST
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Deep. Powerful. Sad. And it was a shout out from your heart and it was very well expressed with your emotions. Keep letting it out. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: You!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:56:08 AM AEST
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beautiful style, flow, and expression of feeling...
love n' hugs nessa |
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