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Self Inflicted Misery
Contributed by
Amaterian_Angel
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Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 09:50:05 AM in AEST
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My friends, they told me not to care.
My friends, they begged me don't you dare,
Believe in hope, or believe in love.
Don't think for once you'll fly like a dove.
But now again, I'm lonely and hurt
And now, again, I feel like dirt.
Who's fault is it?
It's mine, I know.
I chose to believe
I chose this pain.
I choose to cry
I want to fly
And now at end,
I choose to die...
Inside.
Copyright ©
Amaterian_Angel
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2007-04-26 09:50:05]
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Re: Self Inflicted Misery
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:51:32 AM AEST
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great style and flow...
wishing you happiness...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Self Inflicted Misery
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 01:00:43 PM AEST
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| VERY NICELY WRITTEN I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL THERE MAN |
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Re: Self Inflicted Misery
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:40:26 PM AEST
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Its good to write down your pain and you did very well on this piece.
take care |
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Re: Self Inflicted Misery
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by Bloodydragon on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:30:59 AM AEST
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| best way to release pain is to write it down as u have here, flowing raw and deep excellent write. |
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Re: Self Inflicted Misery
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by Agirl on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 09:52:08 AM AEST
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i think this is how many of us think and feel.
it has a great story behind it and a lesson along with it. |
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