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One of a Kind
Contributed by
blissful-ignorance
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Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 12:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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well are you happy now?
look what youve done
you better ******* smile
cause youve almost f***** won
you just wanted him
you never did care
what it might do to me
leave me broken and bare
i couldnt care less
if your happy or not
but if you make him happy
then ill just move on
youve finally won
youve gotten your prize
dont take him for granted
hes one of a kind
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2007-04-26 12:14:05]
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Re: One of a Kind
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 12:50:27 PM AEST
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| WOW I CAN REALLY FEEL THE PAIN IN THIS VERY NICE AND I REPLACED THE "F" WORD WITH FREEKIN AND SO FAR IT HAS STAYED BUT VERY NICE JOB |
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Re: One of a Kind
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:23:19 PM AEST
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Holy cow you sound so angry which i don't blame you.well good write
hope you find some happiness. |
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Re: One of a Kind
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by moloko on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 06:52:35 AM AEST
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| ou start really angry and then end up resigned which is kinda what people experinece in those situations. good write, dont swear so much though cos you lost the vulnerability of your speaker or maybe that was your intention. |
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