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Roses Of Love
Contributed by
Amaterian_Angel
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Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:01:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Roses are red and violets are blue
What is love? Do I love you?
Roses of red with thorns so sharp.
A symbol of beauty, a symbol of love?
Lovers have flaws
And we have our tiffs
But love holds us close
And prevents a rift.
The thorns of the rose
Though sharp and cruel
Compliment the flower
As a balancing tool.
With its scent so sweet
And its petals so fine
Its delicate shape
Of petals entwined.
Our love is sweet
Our loves is fine
So delicate our love
With our minds entwined.
So with roses of red, well never be blue
Because you love me and I love you.
Roses of red my flower beloved
A symbol of beauty, a symbol of love.
Copyright ©
Amaterian_Angel
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2007-04-27 12:01:40]
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by bluestars on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:05:52 PM AEST
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Beautifully written
perfect flow
Best wishes :) |
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by CuttersAngel on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 12:49:42 PM AEST
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i like your poem
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by purplestary on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:17:57 PM AEST
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| beautifull write..i love the way you used the old classic roses are red and violets are blue to express what you had to say...and i simply love when a flower is used as an analogy...i have done that as well..in a different kind of way..but yours is so much better..mine was called "flowers of a different hue." nicely done..absolutely loved it. |
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:02:32 PM AEST
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beautiful..
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:37:08 PM AEST
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Roses are my favorite flower, I never tire of their beauty and I respect the thorn....
I also never tire from reading beautiful and talented poems with the rose in it. You compared love and roses to thorns with great talent and ease. A flowing beauty this is. I would even say it is fragrant.*smiles*
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Roses Of Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:05:33 AM AEST
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a simple yet sweet write.. nicely done
vampyress jenni |
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