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How can One hope
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:09:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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On a warm spring day two decides to grab a blanket..Pack a nice picnic basket will all that is so tantalizing, you cant bare the wait.
They then grab car keys, and set off for a day of adventure.
The clouds were high and perfect. The sun was so warm, but with a hint of cool winds.
Journeying off to that perfect spot, where no other has ventured, too. This would be the spot. No others, just the twos.
They would then grab all the stuff, which had been packed, and move to a field, as green and as open that any eye has ever laid vision on.
This was it... A pleasurable field, with dreams that would always remain, and be kept.
Now off, to the passion. A blanket lay down by the two. Picnic basket set aside, and the two would lay and just stare. No words, just the sounds of nature. Soon, to holding each hand entwined with the others. In a sigh This would be the day that sets what lies ahead. Now more of the dreaming and starring and then to the beautiful feast they will share together.
A bottle of very nice wine; cheese, pastries, and fruits to begin. Making this the ever so special moment, which two in love would begin. Alas, the wind picks up and jostles the trees, making the peaceful sounds that are in store for a lovely afternoon.
The two begin eating the tantalizing fruits, with smiles of pleasure, and passion in their eyes. He then reaches down and brushes the hair of her brow.This way he can see the beauty that is catching in the sun- light. She giggles, smiles, and blushes. He careful keeps brushing the hair away. Soon she finds her self, taking some fruits, and bringing them to his lips. No words Just sensual looks.
After feeding on the wonderful beginning morsels, they then toast to one another. To a new day, week, and future. All was the perfect time, and placeand the two knew this was love, and happiness.
To end, what they had enjoyed, it now was sealed with a breath taking Kiss.
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brew
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2007-04-27 13:09:52]
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Re: How can One hope
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:17:32 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, passonate write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: How can One hope
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:22:59 PM AEST
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WOW YOU TOTALLY TOOK MY BREATH AWAY BREW THE FEELINGS ONE COULD FEEL THERE .......I WILL LEAVE IT AT THAT ...AND TY FOR SHARING WITH ME
LOVE ALWAYS SCOTT |
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Re: How can One hope
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 01:59:34 PM AEST
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I must agree a write so filled with passion it jumped right out and grabbeb me, beautiful!
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Re: How can One hope
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:08:40 PM AEST
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Sweet Dayna~
A passion filled write that steals one breath away with it's beautifully penned contents.
Through your words you take the reader right to that special place and you build up the momentum and seal it with a breath taking kiss. Ah beautiful it is~
I wish this kind of happiness for you my dear friend for you are a most deserving soul~
love & hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: How can One hope
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:35:05 PM AEST
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| wow and wow |
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Re: How can One hope
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by Crow on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 10:52:09 PM AEST
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| what a pretty picture in this write, certainly warms this heart..Vincent |
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Re: How can One hope
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by brownsugar8272 on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:11:44 AM AEST
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| very vivid details of a wonderful time with someone special. I can see it happening good work |
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Re: How can One hope
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:10:31 AM AEST
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vividly refreshingly beautiful....
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: How can One hope
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:29:33 AM AEST
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a very passion filled write. its like a short story very well done and expressed. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: How can One hope
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by brew on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 03:42:10 AM AEST
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Thank you ALL for commenting......IM bad about writing messages to say THANKS.......So I will do it for all of you. Always nice to know people do read.
Love yall
Brew~ |
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Re: How can One hope
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by Bloodydragon on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:44:50 AM AEST
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paints a quaint theme, many feelings striving to be felt and heard, in words flowing into the mind, never dulling always reaching new hieghts,
Excellent poem. |
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