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Earth
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:39:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Round circular space vehicle
on it's orbit through time
Like so many millions of years
spinning
revolving
Growing to the now
nourishing Mother she is
Sustained we are
only by her
Humans?
How can you bite
so savagely at the loving hands
that feed you?
Penned 05/06 unsure exactly which year.
Laura Horner
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Re: Earth
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:53:12 PM AEST
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So true so true
good write sister.
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Re: Earth
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 03:48:39 PM AEST
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beautiful.
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: Earth
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by Crow on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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| I just love this write,, and so real" in truth. It must be true, the small writes sometimes say the most. this is a giant" Vincent |
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Re: Earth
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST
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a very wise write indeed.. well written laurabean
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Earth
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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Laura,
I always admire your concern for nature and our environment, and your focus on responsability and preservation.
Well done my friend,
Will
PS I'm sorry for being so remiss at responding to your poetry, whichi I always enjoy. I know i'm not posting nearly as much either. Life is a bit hectic right now. |
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Re: Earth
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 05:06:35 AM AEST
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It's good to know that some things never change! It's awesome, that you fight for mother nature (although, recently she's been doing a damn good job herslf - Britain, April, People are sunbathing!!! Talk about global warming...) Nice write Laura, as always,
2sdy xxx |
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Re: Earth
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:46:18 AM AEST
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How can you bite so savagely at the loving hands that feed you? Laura this line is awesome and unfortuneately true. And worse yet that hand is getting smaller day by day. A beautiful and essensial peice of writting as always my sister Laura.
((((peace2u))))
Ben
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Re: Earth
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:40:52 PM AEST
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I love this the ending so powerful and true.
Great write sis
Michelle |
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Re: Earth
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by Spike on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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Ahh, Laura, children are so ungrateful, but not your audience. I enjoyed this poem, although Ol' Man Sol should get some credit for surface life...
Spike |
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Re: Earth
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 02:55:01 AM AEST
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| How many voices will it take to speak these truths? Thank you for adding another voice. We must be heard. Wonderful pen Laura. |
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