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'A's Mental Breakdown
Contributed by
SomeDude
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Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:08:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Dearest Father, in fictional fame you will fall and I will stand laughing.
Your Lady crippled and hurt-droved with despair but not known where going.
You choke me by the strings and pull it in harder fashion.
By years it dresses by my throat.
A Puppet you say? No this aint true no crown clays over the clear sky but that be its very enemy, no.
Nothing controls me but drains the very person I ever loved.
Counselor dont you think Im aware that Im a danger to self?
Dont you think I know hatred lies in a territorial womb that never heals?
You wont know, you wont know.
Dearest Mother, your holy Madonna forever gone-sleep
With your trouser and your bra, always were unkempt.
You cloth yourself with the men on the streets
And never wondered what was ever left.
But ma, Im a better person.
But ma, I never loved you.
But you wont know.
Dearest Brother, you seek for love in false conversations
But your tongue never speaks.
You f---ed her, thats what you did
And shes pregnant, shes pregnant now.
I know how it feels but you wont know.
Sister do you believe who I say Im,
That Im a frown that hurts and nothing more-do you believe thats who Im?
Do you believe that I feel and cry but the one that growls and sighs,
Is that who Im?
Do you believe that I never could?
Do you believe Im a mental breakdown?
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Re: 'A's Mental Breakdown
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 04:00:44 AM AEST
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Powerful. Words that I can relate too. This was a good poem and I liked the expressions and emoitons that flowed through this beautifully. Wonderful poem.
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